Saturday, June 19, 2010

Can some one please give me some criticism on my poem?

She thinks about the other side



wondering if you live to die



if only she would've cried



talk to some one instead of hide.



Now she thinks its too late



To let her emotional sunami wave



Wash over her as her fate



Her heart is a deserted cave.



Selfish acts are all that're here



Human nature took her too far



As she looks down a single tear



Hit a the small figure of a car.



Wind whips through her strawberry hair



An errie chill runs up her spine



She thinks this is the only way to be fair



She had no will left to shine.



The line between living



And simply exsisting before demise



Was behind her, the end was giving



Death was ahead of her, her prize.



She looked up at the clear blue



Watched a bird pass a cloud



And jumped while enjoying her view



Only to hope it would not be too loud



Absorbed by weightlessness



Her limbs were spread wide



She would not die feeling less



Not wanting to abide



Pavement glared her in the eye



As she neared the end



She had reached the ultimate high



And not a single injury she'd mend



The cord pulled at her waist



She passed the tear of fear cried at the top



Thinking she had maybe been acting in haste



When she decided to drop.



Friends pulled her to refuge



She sobbed in their arms



There warmth and love was huge



She did not want any more harms.



Now thankful for her being



This girl took a step toward lady



She learned to see life as freeing



No longer was she ever shady.



Can some one please give me some criticism on my poem?

Inconsistency in playing with the rhyming ends.



The story is a bit too cliche. But undeniably touching.



And its spelled 'tsunami'.



Can some one please give me some criticism on my poem?

Your rythym is off in most of the poem. It looks like your struggling to end every other line with a rhyme, regardless of whether or not it's lyrically right.



Can some one please give me some criticism on my poem?

Its has TOO many rhymes. EVERY line of your poem has a rhyme!



Can some one please give me some criticism on my poem?

Its too long.



Can some one please give me some criticism on my poem?

It kinda sounds weird. Maybe you should give "her" a name.



I think it'll sound better that way.



Can some one please give me some criticism on my poem?

deserves no criticism, it's very very good as it is



Can some one please give me some criticism on my poem?

Very very deep.

What kinds of physical features do you find attractive?

I would like to know what you, members of the largest community on Earth (the internet), find attractive. Don't post things like "I don't care at all about how people look; why do you?! %26gt;:O" because this question is meant to gather personal, unbound, and yes, shallow opinions. Most peoples' opinions on human beauty and attractiveness don't affect their interpersonal relationships (who they talk to, who they make friends with, etc), so just give me your thoughts. Do you like freckles? Do you gentlemen (and ladies!) really prefer blondes? Do you like long hair or high cheekbones? Tell me what you like, what you think! And just to clear this up, feel free to mention ethnicity (it's not racism to say you don't like the typical features of any given ethnicity, it's an aesthetic preference!) Thank you.



What kinds of physical features do you find attractive?

I'm a hand person. Hands turn me on. That is what is going to be touching my body.



What kinds of physical features do you find attractive?

a brain, a heart, etc



What kinds of physical features do you find attractive?

i love longer noses!! odd?



What kinds of physical features do you find attractive?

Myself, I LOVE long, dark shining hair.



What kinds of physical features do you find attractive?

Tall, broad shoulders, full lips, pretty eyes, white teeth, clean hands, messy hair, and a raspy voice.



What kinds of physical features do you find attractive?

I love seeing a genuine smile that includes the eyes.



What kinds of physical features do you find attractive?

I like dimples, twinkle in the eyes, straight teeth, blue eyes and dark hair, or bald.



What kinds of physical features do you find attractive?

the first thing I notice are the eyes -are they sparkling with love of life, or dull/bored -centered on the person they are talking to rather than surfing the scene. I fell in love with my husband (from the physical standpoint) because of his eye and gorgeous wavy hair and beautiful hands, all of which is superficial compared to what was going on inside of him..



What kinds of physical features do you find attractive?

I like long red hair, freckles, and long legs. When there is a strong contrast (dark skin and very light colored eyes or light skin and dark eyes), I find it extremely appealing. I like any hair style that looks good on the person, but I don't see the point of skinhead look. High cheekbones and fine noses are so attractive as well. I love well-toned bodies, and people who take pride in their bodies - keeping fit but not overly muscular. Just good housekeeping, so to speak :)



The funny thing is one of the most attractive people I know is this rather fat person who is short and well nothing much too look at. But there is this little sparkle in the eye and this devilish smile that beats all competition. It is really amazing to see :)



What kinds of physical features do you find attractive?

I like cute pointy noses on girls and strong jawlines on men. Also if he has a cleft chin I swoon! Green eyes are great and I go for brunettes more than blondes.



What kinds of physical features do you find attractive?

Being 5'0", I am attracted to tall guys. I like medium build, no muscles. I like a nice set of teeth and a very sexy smile with or without dimples.



What kinds of physical features do you find attractive?

I adore Scottish men!! I guess that's why I married one!



What kinds of physical features do you find attractive?

I love pale skin or slightly dark skin. I find slimness appealing, and I don't like the look of being overly muscular. I love wavy, copper or rust-colored hair (as well as other brunette type colors), and smirky smiles. I like to be able to look into someone's eyes and see some hint of their personality. I am attracted mostly to asians and caucasians, and find peoples' ideas of attractiveness to be a very funny, quirky thing.



What kinds of physical features do you find attractive?

Aesthetic preference - a lovely way of putting it. Thank you.



As far as features, I have a bit of an obsession with hands - unfortunately, I'm the child of a nurse, so I can't help but notice if the beautiful hands I'm staring at would be easy to get an IV started on.



Do I prefer blondes? Please no. My favorite look is a tragically predictable cliche - tall, dark, and handsome.



What kinds of physical features do you find attractive?

Well different people admire different things. The way a guy dresses--what he wears intrigue me. I have to like this about him. His style. Neat, but unique. That and his confidence and gentleness.



What kinds of physical features do you find attractive?

okay data collector...I like chiselled , muscular features in men and I like rounded, fullness in women. I think the Twiggy look in either gender is out. Take a look a music videos. They show fullness in either gender.The sales of the songs would show this is a true statement.

Evolution HA HA HA I like your sense of HUMOR evolutionists only?

The test of any theory is whether or not it provides answers to basic questions. Some well-meaning, but misguided, people think evolution is a reasonable theory to explain man閳ユ獨 questions about the universe. Evolution is not a good theory閳ユ攰t is just a pagan religion masquerading as science. The following questions were distributed to the 750-plus people who attended my debate at Winona State University in Winona, Minnesota, on January 9, 1993. (The videotaped debate is #6, $9.95.) Questions added since the debate remarked with an asterisk (*).



Where did the space for the universe come from?



Where did matter come from?



Where did the laws of the universe come from (gravity, inertia, etc.)?



How did matter get so perfectly organized?



Where did the energy come from to do all the organizing?



When, where, why, and how did life come from non-living matter?



When, where, why, and how did life learn to reproduce itself?



With what did the first cell capable of sexual reproduction reproduce?



Why would any plant or animal want to reproduce more of its kind since this would only make more mouths to feed and decrease the chances of survival? (Does the individual have a drive to surviv e, or the species? How do you explain this?)



How can mutations (recombining of the genetic code) create any new, improved varieties? (Recombining English letters will never produce Chinese books.)



Is it possible that similarities in design between different animals prove a common Creator instead of a common ancestor?



Natural selection only works with the genetic information available and tends only to keep a species stable. How would you explain the increasing complexity in the genetic code that must have occ urred if evolution were true?



When, where, why, and how did:



Single-celled plants become multi-celled? (Where are the two and three-celled intermediates?)



Single-celled animals evolve?



Fish change to amphibians?



Amphibians change to reptiles?



Reptiles change to birds? (The lungs, bones, eyes, reproductive organs, heart, method of locomotion, body covering, etc., are all very different!)



How did the intermediate forms live?



When, where, why, how, and from what did:



Whales evolve?



Sea horses evolve?



Bats evolve?



Eyes evolve?



Ears evolve?



Hair, skin, feathers, scales, nails, claws, etc., evolve?



Which evolved first (how, and how long; did it work without the others)?



The digestive system, the food to be digested, the appetite, the ability to find and eat the food, the digestive juices, or the body閳ユ獨 resistance to its own digestive juice (stomach, intestines, etc.)?



The drive to reproduce or the ability to reproduce?



The lungs, the mucus lining to protect them, the throat, or the perfect mixture of gases to be breathed into the lungs?



DNA or RNA to carry the DNA message to cell parts?



The termite or the flagella in its intestines that actually digest the cellulose?



The plants or the insects that live on and pollinate the plants?



The bones, ligaments, tendons, blood supply, or muscles to move the bones?



The nervous system, repair system, or hormone system?



The immune system or the need for it?



There are many thousands of examples of symbiosis that defy an evolutionary explanation. Why must we teach students that evolution is the only explanation for these relationships?



How would evolution explain mimicry? Did the plants and animals develop mimicry by chance, by their intelligent choice, or by design?



When, where, why, and how did man evolve feelings? Love, mercy, guilt, etc. would never evolve in the theory of evolution.



*How did photosynthesis evolve?



*How did thought evolve?



*How did flowering plants evolve, and from that?



*What kind of evolutionist are you? Why are you not one of the other eight or ten kinds?



What would you have said fifty years ago if I told you I had a living coelacanth in my aquarium?



*Is there one clear prediction of macroevolution that has proved true?



*What is so scientific about the idea of hydrogen as becoming human?



*Do you honestly believe that everything came from nothing?



After you have answered the preceding questions, please look carefully at your answers and thoughtfully consider the following questions.



Are you sure your answers are reasonable, right, and scientifically provable, or do you just believe that it may have happened the way you have answered? (Do these answers reflect your religion or your science?)



Do your answers show more or less faith than the person who says, "God must have designed it"?



Is it possible that an unseen Creator designed this universe? If God is excluded at the beginning of the discussion by your definition of science, how could it be shown that He did create the universe if He did?



Is it wise and fair to present the theory of evolution to students as fact?



What is the end result of a belief in evolution (lifestyle, society, attitude about others, eternal destiny, etc.)?



Do people accept evolution because of the following factors?



It is all they have been taught.



They like the freedom from God (no moral absolutes, etc.).



They are bound to support the theory for fear of losing their job or status or grade point average.



They are too proud to admit they are wrong.



Evolution is the only philosophy that can be used to justify their political agenda.



Should we continue to use outdated, disproved, questionable, or inconclusive evidences to support the theory of evolution because we don閳ユ獩 have a suitable substitute (Piltdown man, recapitulation, archaeopteryx, Lucy, Java man, Neanderthal man, horse evolution, vestigial organs, etc.)?



Evolution HA HA HA I like your sense of HUMOR evolutionists only?

You're doing a heckuva job Chuck - now everyone here is justifiably convinced that creationists are a pack of ignorant hillbillies. You appear to be unaware of the logical and scientific errors in your post. It閳ユ獨 easy to misrepresent something and then tear it to pieces; that閳ユ獨 a common technique in debate. But debate is a form of academic sport - there is a winner and a loser, - the truth is beside the point. Science has winners and losers too, but it's the truth that wins; debates prove nothing.



No matter what you say, even if you correct your more ridiculous assertions, evolution will remain a solidly-grounded scientific, overwhelmingly accepted theory that makes a firm foundation for all biological thought. That閳ユ獨 the position it occupies right now 閳?debate with a pack of hillbillies won閳ユ獩 change a thing.



Evolution has been proven to those who know, it is discussed with those who understand, and it is advanced by those who can see farther but it will never be reduced a single notch by those who haven閳ユ獩 learned it at all. Until you read a bit more about the how and what of evolution, your comments are going to sound just a little too shrill.



I notice in your introductory statements you never actually defined evolution. I would wager (based on the rest of your question) that you can閳ユ獩 define evolution. So what exactly are we talking about here? What exactly are you trying to say? What exactly are you selling? I challenge you to define evolution in your own words.



Evolution HA HA HA I like your sense of HUMOR evolutionists only?

Your physical prowess is much more impressive than your intellectual abilities, Chuck. Report It



Evolution HA HA HA I like your sense of HUMOR evolutionists only?

Are you finished? The bible does not answer these questions either.



Evolution HA HA HA I like your sense of HUMOR evolutionists only?

I guess I'm missing something....The last time I checked...there was indisputable proof of Evolution. Are you saying all of that is a lie meant to drag people to hell? Are you some religious fanatic? I mean, where do you stand on religion? You aren't being very forthcoming about how you "feel"! What is your game??



Evolution HA HA HA I like your sense of HUMOR evolutionists only?

Are you realy asking a question or just posting your closed mind philosophy. If you are realy intersted in answers to some of your questions then email me.



Evolution HA HA HA I like your sense of HUMOR evolutionists only?

I don't believe everything came from nothing. I believe there is no beginning to the elements that make life. Something cannot come from nothing, so the only explanation, something always existed.



Evolution HA HA HA I like your sense of HUMOR evolutionists only?

It doesn't really matter what can be proven or not because people will believe what they want. Basically what it all comes down to is one simple question. Is there a creator? The only way we will ever know for sure is when we die. Some will be happy and some will be disappointed. I guess my point is that while we are alive the questions will never be answered fully and satisfactorily. We can wonder, we can debate and argue, we can test but we'll never know for sure.



Evolution HA HA HA I like your sense of HUMOR evolutionists only?

If there was nothing in the true sense of the word, then by all means, there was nothing. Not even a creator. Where did the energy come from to create the creator?



Why couldnt a creator create a system so complex that evolution is a part. Both sides could be right.



Evolution HA HA HA I like your sense of HUMOR evolutionists only?

And the earth is flat!



And the sun circles the earth!



Deja vu!



Evolution HA HA HA I like your sense of HUMOR evolutionists only?

Like most who argue against evolution, you misunderstand so many of the basic concepts of the science of evolution, as well as build arguments on fallicies. For example you ask "Single-celled plants become multi-celled? (Where are the two and three-celled intermediates?) " Isnt a two celled plant multicellular by definition? If it has more than one cell isnt it multicellular? There is no intermediate then. So what are you looking for? Other arguments that can posed against your side are questions like "If God created the earth in seven days, then why don't we have strong tradition of the times before the dinosaurs were extinct and how horrific life must have been before God killed them and saved us?" Its easy enough to believe that God started the whole process off and let in run for millions and millions of years. Doesnt that make God all the more amazing that he could create such an elaborate and painstakingly complicated way for us to arise become his children? Doesn't the complexity of something like evolution only give us insight to how complex God must be to have devised it all? Dont make such a wide statement that all people who believe in evolution are following some pagan religion. Its just untrue...



Evolution HA HA HA I like your sense of HUMOR evolutionists only?

A lot of interesting questions there. One important point to make is that there are mutiple types of evolution. The most common form is macro-evolution which is the theory that one species is capable of changing into another. This, as of yet, is an unproven theory, thus why it is still called a theory. Micro-evolution, however, is an observable event that has been proven as fact. Species will change and adapt to surroundings to improve their ability to survive (i.e. the common tree moths that turned from light to dark after the light trees slowly became darker when covered with debris expelled from factories). However, they remain the same species. The moth does not become a bird or anything other than a moth.



It is always important to make a distinction between the various types of evolutionary theory (another type is cosmic-evolution). Remember, a theory cannot be proven until it is observable and repeatable (among other criteria). The changing of one species into another species (ex. fish to lizard, lizard to bird, etc.) has never even been observed.



Evolution HA HA HA I like your sense of HUMOR evolutionists only?

I can write plenty on each of your questions, regardless of the fact that they're weaseled to ask for the answer you want.



I'll answer two here



What kind of evolutionist are you? Why are you not one of the other eight or ten kinds?



I am not an evolutionist. I am a person who has studied biological systems and can see the evidence of evolution.



Do you honestly believe that everything came from nothing?



I cannot say whether the universe was created or just happened. I can find no evidence to support or reject either hypothesis.



Evolution HA HA HA I like your sense of HUMOR evolutionists only?

Wow, apparently another creationist trying to ridicule what he/she does not understand. Before I answer your question allow me to tell you where I stand! I am a biologist, and a man of faith. As the former, I do go to church, I do believe there is a higher power, and I do believe he/she/it has some influence on our world and lives. But I do not believe in the literal interpretation of the bible (a document written by man, albeit by devine influence, supposedly thousands of years after the fact (Old Testament))! As a biologist, I understand that science is a realm of theory based on observation, evidence, experimentation, and reproducibility! When confronted with a question, to which I don't know the meaning, I would rather research and find a possible answer based on whatever evidence I can find rather than invoke the hand of god!



Darwin did exactly this when he cataloged the strange new animals he found on his journey through South America and the Galapagos. He noticed many similarities between animals on the mainland, and animals on the islands. It was because of these observations that he came up with the basic idea of evolution - AN IDEA WHICH HE KNEW would question his own faith - something that troubled him to the grave!



Those of us who have researched the idea behind evolution will admit, there are holes in the theory which need to be, and probably will never be filled (the fossil record for example). And while there is a mountain of evidence supporting the theory, those of us who are scientists do keep an open mind to the evidence that seems to contradict it!



Regrettably, those who are staunch supporters against evolution can only ridicule the idea, fabricate contrary evidence of their own, rely in faulty miss-interpretation of existing evidence, or as you have done - pose a list of questions many of which are currently unanswerable! Creation "scientists" have yet to come up with a scientifically valid answer to the basic questions Darwin and others have asked - when you do I am listening!



Evolution HA HA HA I like your sense of HUMOR evolutionists only?

It's very simple



Evolution is taught as fact



I ask you



look at all the replys to your question



I'm a pure theoritacal math, I know just over 300 TM guys that just fall over and laugh at any thing to do with "evolution"



it's just SILLY



EVOLUTION :-



I will not cleen my house, then evo will make order out of the mess



if you wash a knife or foek, you might be holding up EVo



Oh I left a 5 Euro note on the table last night and it Evolved into 75 pounds Sterling



Hay this Evolution is as good and FACTUAL as the FRB



All the best to you Man, Please let me know if anyone answers your questions



latters



Paul



Evolution HA HA HA I like your sense of HUMOR evolutionists only?

I have an idea: if you're interested in answers, pick a question, then post it.



Also, don't cut 'n' paste from "Dr." Kent Hovind, known tax cheat and fake-diploma holder. Even other creationists try to distance themselves from him.



Another point: many of these question simply have nothing at all to do with evolution. If you can't understand that basic point, then you need to learn a little bit....

In the honor of Stupid people..............?

In Honor of Stupid People閳ヮ毌n case you needed further proof that the human race is doomed through stupidity, here are some actual label instructions on consumer goods:



On a Sears hairdryer 閳?Do not use while sleeping. (That閳ユ獨 the only time I have to work on my hair.)



On a bag of Fritos 閳?You could be a winner! No purchase necessary. Details inside. (the shoplifter special?)



On a bar of Dial soap 閳?閳ユ窉irections: Use like regular soap.閳?(and that would be???閳?)



On some Swanson frozen dinners 閳?閳ユ藩erving suggestion: Defrost.閳?(but, it閳ユ獨 just a suggestion.)



On Tesco閳ユ獨 Tiramisu dessert (printed on bottom) 閳?閳ユ窉o not turn upside down.閳?(well閳ヮ泭uh, a bit late, huh!)



On Marks %26amp;Spencer Bread Pudding 閳?閳ユ阀roduct will be hot after heating.閳?(and you thought?)



On packaging for a Rowenta iron 閳?閳ユ窉o not iron clothes on body.閳?br> (but wouldn閳ユ獩 this save me time?)



On a Japanese food processor 閳?閳ユ罚ot to be used for the other use.閳?(now, somebody out there, help me. I閳ユ獡 a bit curious!)



In the honor of Stupid people..............?

That's good stuff,how about these?



On a driving mirror in USA: "Remember, objects in the mirror are actually behind you."



On a steering wheel lock: "Warning -- remove lock before driving."



On a Korean kitchen knife: "Keep out of children."



On a carton of sleeping tablets: "Clinically proved night time sleep aid... Warning: May cause drowsiness..."



On a Chinese packet of peanuts: "Open packet and eat contents."



On a Swedish chainsaw: "Do not try to stop the saw with your hands."



On an can of insecticide: "Kills all kinds of insects... Warning: this product is harmful to bees."



In the honor of Stupid people..............?

LOL.....pretty good..thanks for the smile!



In the honor of Stupid people..............?

proving stupid people are still breeding



In the honor of Stupid people..............?

Well we are a stupid lot aren't we



In the honor of Stupid people..............?

so many stupid people are breeding........



In the honor of Stupid people..............?

This was a great laugh first thing in the morning!!! Thanks! Excellent observations!



In the honor of Stupid people..............?

All this time I was using Dial like irregular soap. Silly me.



In the honor of Stupid people..............?

no



In the honor of Stupid people..............?

Now companies that sell coffee like Starbucks have to put little warnings on their labels to tell people that their coffee is going to be hot.



I mean come on, how stupid do you have to be.



In the honor of Stupid people..............?

oh you are so right. stupid manufacturer's don't know crap!!!



In the honor of Stupid people..............?

I didn't understand the question , but thanks for the helpful hints



In the honor of Stupid people..............?

Excellent!!!!! The list probably could go on and on...Stupidity never ends!!!!!



In the honor of Stupid people..............?

That was quite funny lmao



In the honor of Stupid people..............?

Good ones, of course, but I've heard about those a few years ago. Take care, and keep searching for new fun stuff!



In the honor of Stupid people..............?

This is not due to stupidity but instead it is due to greed. I work in Manufacturing. We have to put labels like this on things because if we do not smart people will misuse these item and sue us for money while saying they were to stupid to understand how to use the item correctly. I believe the human race is domed but from greed not stupidity.



In the honor of Stupid people..............?

Oh...two points.



In the honor of Stupid people..............?

i know alot of people that act like that, lol i might go tell my friends this one...



In the honor of Stupid people..............?

Hi My Name Is luke And i Am Sleeping



In the honor of Stupid people..............?

LOL.... unfortunately, the only reason those labels had to be put on those things is because someone did indeed do those stupid things once and probably tried to sue them for it. That's why you see on coffee cups that you buy at gas stations or fast food restaurants...... "caution: contents may be hot". And not to mention the warning labels on cigarette packs nowadays.



HERE'S YOUR SIGN



In the honor of Stupid people..............?

Stupid Is As Stupid Does... Would You Like A Chocolate?... Sh1t Happens... I Did Get Shot In The Butt And Got On The Cover Of Time Magazine...



In the honor of Stupid people..............?

ah yes .. stupid people... They Make the World Go round !! LOL



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really like these.... LOL.....



In the honor of Stupid people..............?

japenese food processor i thin that they mena you cant blend your body parts... darn



In the honor of Stupid people..............?

It's only inevitable. Everyone seems to know better though. Yet there's still lawsuits over having hot coffee spilled on people. I think americans believe that we live in the promised land, so shouldn't we have our asses wiped for us? People need jobs, but more importantly, they need to be educated and leisuress. Get a soul! I can break my arm and rehabilitate it back to right, with no medical training whatsoever. Yet, others can get a boo boo and make millions! **** me!



In the honor of Stupid people..............?

The scary part is that somebody has probably sued over the label not saying some of these silly things and thus the silly labels.



In the honor of Stupid people..............?

those remarks are put there because of all the people that do stupid things then sue the company like the guy who sued mcdonalds when he spilled his HOT coffee. that way the companies could protect their money. now, no one can sue marks %26amp; spencer for burning themselves.



In the honor of Stupid people..............?

All 3 of those were super funny!! What is going on with people lol



In the honor of Stupid people..............?

the proofs were good.. but more than that, i love the comments you gave... now that seriously cracked me up! LOL!



In the honor of Stupid people..............?

Pretty funny, but I didn't need the witty commentary in the parenthesis. I got what was ironic about the labels.



In the honor of Stupid people..............?

Isn't the world getting way too sue happy. We wouldn't have to have all of these stupid warning signs.

Movie help!?

There was this movie, or show that I watched when I was really little, and I can not for the life of me remember what it was, and no one I know has a clue either. Maybe someone out there will know and set my mind to rest. All I can remember of the show is that there is a boy, and he has black hair (it's a cartoon by the way). He has a friend of some sort (I think) but it's not necisarrilly a human. I think it might be an animal. Anyway, the boy goes down underground, or just in the basement of some building, and when he comes out he's running away from a massive thing of black goo that's chasing him. I know it's not much, but it's been bothering me for so long. Do any of you have a clue?



Movie help!?

I think its lilo and stitch.



Movie help!?

I know it's not animated, but could it be The Neverending Story?



Movie help!?

Hey Minuit! I think the movie's Fern Gully: The Last Rainforest. There was a black goo thing, the oil. It was scary when i was little. Anywho, yahoo!!!

What qualities of women are displayed as the point of view brought nearer in the poem?

She was a Phantom of delight



When first she gleamed upon my sight;



A lovely Apparition, sent



To be a moment's ornament;



Her eyes as stars of Twilight fair;



Like Twilight's, too, her dusky hair;



But all things else about her drawn



From May-time and the cheerful Dawn;



A dancing Shape, an Image gay,



To haunt, to startle, and way-lay.



I saw her upon nearer view,



A Spirit, yet a Woman too!



Her household motions light and free,



And steps of virgin-liberty;



A countenance in which did meet



Sweet records, promises as sweet;



A Creature not too bright or good



For human nature's daily food;



For transient sorrows, simple wiles,



Praise, blame, love, kisses, tears, and smiles.



And now I see with eye serene



The very pulse of the machine;



A Being breathing thoughtful breath,



A Traveller between life and death;



The reason firm, the temperate will,



Endurance, foresight, strength, and skill;



A perfect Woman, nobly planned,



To warn, to comfort, and command;



And yet a Spirit



What qualities of women are displayed as the point of view brought nearer in the poem?

Could be real good with just a little more work!



What qualities of women are displayed as the point of view brought nearer in the poem?

submissive and hesitant, timorous and uncertain, susceptible yet insincere and a little loathsome



good luck

How can I tell if my shih-tzu dog is pregnant?

She is a very small dog and has a lot of hair so it's kind of hard to tell. She also was chubby when we got her a couple of months ago from another family that didn't want her. We had already had a male puppy that we got last christmas and it's impossible to seperate them we're in the same house! We came home one time and caught them in the act. I have notice she isn't able to keep up with us on our walks and she has less energy than before and she isn't eating as much. Also, I woke up one morning to her throwing up in my room and she has a couple of other times. I don't want to transfer human signs of pregnancy to our dog but it seemed like morning sickness and i guess she has gained a couple of pounds around the stomache area. Please help....i'm only 20 and i have no idea what to look for!



How can I tell if my shih-tzu dog is pregnant?

yes it sounds like she is pregnant, dogs do have some symtoms as a humans they have morning sickness and tend to not eat as much as they use too, you need to take her to the vet and they can give her a pregnancie test and she will need to taken to the vet to make sure there will be no problems when she whelps the pups and if she is pregnant then make sure you take her in right after she has delivered the pups to make sure she is doing ok and that the pups are healthly



How can I tell if my shih-tzu dog is pregnant?

dogs dont have the same side effects as humans.



How can I tell if my shih-tzu dog is pregnant?

Well-get them spayed and neutered first thing. Secondly, you can keep them in separate rooms or crates-thirdly--whether she is or isn't pregnant, she needs to see a vet.



How can I tell if my shih-tzu dog is pregnant?

if she starts demanding pickles and ice cream, your in trouble!



How can I tell if my shih-tzu dog is pregnant?

Dogs living in the same house can and need to be separated if you have a female in heat. Better yet health wise for both dogs, they need to be spayed and neutered.



This dog should be taken to the vet for a check-up. While there, the vet can educate you on how to look after a pregnant dog, help her through whelping and look after a litter of puppies. It's time to educate yourself now before doing damage to your dog and/or her puppies.



How can I tell if my shih-tzu dog is pregnant?

wait and got 2 tha vet



How can I tell if my shih-tzu dog is pregnant?

Take her to a vet pronto! even if shes not pregnant, she needs some kind of medical care for her symtoms. Please don't let your little dog suffer. She could be sick from something else. Also dogs don't normaly get morning sickness



How can I tell if my shih-tzu dog is pregnant?

Mayde she is hurting if she is pregnant so she doesn't fell hungry if puppies are pushing on her stomach, pet her it might relax her. You answered your own question eveything you have said is a sign of a pregnant animal. Well a week before she has the puppies her nippels will start to fill up with milk , look for that. also weigh her now then weigh her again in a week or so. Be careful she is a small dog and might have dead puppies or you mite have a dead dog, the puppies mite be to much on her.



How can I tell if my shih-tzu dog is pregnant?

Yes, she sounds like she may be pregnant...



you may not be able to keep them apart, but you can spay and neuter to prevent puppies. You should do them both, but atleast do one of them. spaying/neutering adds years to a dogs life, and can prevent certain cancers.

 
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